"I don't usually show it to anyone before it's finished. I trust you didn't run off and submit it to a publisher or anything." No way," she laughed, relief in her voice. "I just read around in it a little bit." And? What did you think?" It's good," she said. "You're an awesome writer. It's just... some of it is a bit wordy. You know, long-winded? Like you were writing for pages."His initial impulse was to defend his work and brush her criticism aside. Then he reminded himself that this was Erica, not some blowhard newspaper critic or snot-nosed creative writing student."Wordy, huh? Yeah, I guess I go off on tangents on occasion. To tell you the truth, I don't like it much myself." Oh, no, it's good," Erica protested. "Your descriptions are awesome. I couldn't write like that in a hundred years. It's just that you could cut about half of it without hurting the rest." My niece, the literature critic," he laughed. "Maybe you can pick up the torch after I quit this stuff. It looks like. Allison found herself trembling as she watched his white cream cover the dark mounds in the bowl. When the last squirt was done, she squeezed the last drop out. Then she looked up at Chris, waiting for him to tell her what to do. "Let's go back into the family room so you can eat your snack." Allison followed her son back into the family room and they sat on the couch. Chris looked at his mother as she stared into the bowl. Then he watched as she mixed up the sperm and ice cream and began to eat it. He had to smile at the look on his mother's innocent face as she secretly ate his sperm mixed with her chocolate ice cream. When she had taken several large spoonfuls, he saw her begin to squirm on the seat. Then her body began to tense and then she shuddered; he knew that she was climaxing. His father sat in his favorite chair totally unaware. After that incident Chris began to push his relationship with his mother as far as she would allow him. He had become desperate to use his mouth.
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